"Can We Curb the Privacy Invaders"

This essay was very similar to that of Bill Nelson's. Ray Spencer has good supporting evidence for his argument for privacy. He makes his claims and supports them with examples of false privacy guarantees in the coorporate world. Also, he gives solutions to the issue of privacy in the last section of the essay. I think that the paper is effective but is a little too long. It could be shorter and have the same point come across so that people are more willing to read it.